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47.
Mother speaks with Martha about Mary.
Marther is very angry about the way, Mary had to go. Mother says the child is able to live in a normal way soon.
48.
Martha is back in school and has to show a note, other kids make fun about her, but she answers in a cool way. Martha tells Scott to find Mary about the interne, nut by radio. she tells him the pet name Marfa and Scott is happy about the reaction at fight.
49.
Scott is thinking of Martha all the time. He feels, he is in love. He imagines their time together when school is free.
50.
When Martha comes home, her parents tell her, they will move very soon. She is warried about Scott and Mary and the boy.
51.
Martha is lockes in her room. She thinks about the possibilities to give Scott information about her move.
52.
When Scott comming to school friday he hears about Martha leaving the school. He is shocked and wants to know, where Martha moves. But he didn´t get any information.
53.
Martha has to care about Abomination and pack her cloaths. She helps her mother and try to find a possibility to go out, to leave a message for Scott.
54.
Scott wants to go to Martha but at first he checks the internet and find a message from Mary. He wants to tell it to Martha, but he doesn´t know how, so he anserd.
55.
Scott wants to tell Martha his fellings. He finds her notic to a fence. He thinks about a possible communication.
56.
Martha waits for Scott. The phone is ringing. Father talks and a person speakts unclear things, but its a secret message.
57.
Scott thinks aobut, if his plan has the right effect. He imagines he rescue of the boy and Marther, form Mary.
58.
Marther has a bad night. She prays for Mary to come. When Marther caresabout Abomination. sombody is on the door. The Father is really aggressive and Marther knows its Mary. She screem to place the child. She take the child and run to Mary. Mary takes the boy and takes Marther too.
59.
Scott sees the car with Martha and Mary. He is happy, but sad about they will never meet again. he knows they are young, but he is in love. Scott asks hisselpf if Marther thinks of him, too.
60.
Marther speaks about her new life with Mary, Jim, Jim is the new name for Abomination, Annette in a new school with normal cloaths she gets to know new friends. Annette showx her how to work with the internet and Marther wants to write an email to Scott.
GAST stellte diese Frage am 20.04.2009 - 21:04

 
Antwort von GAST | 20.04.2009 - 21:14
müssen
ja nicht gleich alle sein

 
Antwort von GAST | 20.04.2009 - 23:52
Problem: keiner weiß hier, worum es in deiner Hausaufgabe geht. Von daher ist korrigieren schwierig.

Sprachlich bzw. was die Rechtschreibung und Grammatik angeht, sind leider einige Klopfer drin. Mir ist es jetzt zu spät, die einzeln rauszuschreiben, aber schau doch mal auf folgende Aspekte - da findest du sicherlich auch selber einiges. :)

1. Groß- und Kleinschreibung
"The Father is really aggressive..."

The father, denn Nomen werden im Englischen mitten im Satz klein geschrieben.

2. He, she, it - S muss mit!
She screem to place the child.

She screams ... (mit a!).

3. Apostrophe:
"... and Marther knows its Mary."

...and Marther knows it´s Mary.

4. Deine Sätze ergeben, zumindest für mich, z.T. keinen Sinn.
"The Father is really aggressive and Marther knows its Mary."

Manchmal hilft da das Zurück-Übersetzen ins Deutsche. Dann lautet dieser Satz: Der Vater ist sehr agressiv und Marther weiß es ist Mary... ?

 
Antwort von GAST | 23.04.2009 - 19:06
danke, stimmt, hast recht. findet wer noch mehr fehler?


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Antwort von agathamary (ehem. Mitglied) | 23.04.2009 - 19:22
zurückübersetzt würde der Satz heißen ... Marther kennt seine Mary, wobei `seine` sich im Englischen auf ein Subjekt bezieht, das `it` heißen müsste, also ein Gegenstand sein müsste. Das ergibt also keinen Sinn
und dann solltest du dich entscheiden für eine Zeitform, wenn das eine Zusammenfassung sein soll, dann bitte im simple present (siehe oben: he/she /it das s muss mit), wenn du erzählen willst, was da jetzt gerade passiert, müsstest du Pres. progressive (oder continuous ) nehmen, z.b. 56 Var. 1: Martha waits for Scott, the phone rings ´, her (?) father takls and somebody says something she cannot understand, but it is (it`s) a secret message.
Var. 2: Martha is waiting for Scott and the phone is ringing, so her father is answering the phone and talking. She can hear somebody but cannot understand what this person is saying because it is a secret message.
Es wäre also gut, wenn du mal angibst, was das eigentlich sein (werden) soll.
Generell gitb es offenbar auch ein problem mit `it`s` und `its`.
it`s (oder im geschriebenen Englisch it is) heißt es ist, das ist also eine sogenannte Kurzform vom Verb.
its ist (siehe oben) eine Possessivform (besitzanzeigend)
z.b. the village and its inhabitants - das Dorf und seine Einwohner
the church and its windows - die Kirche und ihre Fenster, d.g. its bezieht sich immer auf Gegenstände oder auch Tiere, wenn sie nicht gerade die eigenen Haustiere sind (the cat and its tail, aber my cat Miezi and her tail).
Frag einfach, wenn etwas unklar ist


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Antwort von Meshoo (ehem. Mitglied) | 23.04.2009 - 21:49
47.
Mother speaks with Martha about Mary. Martha is very angry about the way, Mary had to go. Mother says the child is able to live in a normal way soon.
48.
Martha is back in school and has to show a note, other kids make fun of her, but she answers in a cool way. Martha tells Scott to find Mary using the internet ,not the radio.She tells him the pet name Marfa and Scott is happy about the reaction at fight.
49.
Scott is thinking of Martha all the time. He feels that he`s in love. He imagines their time together when school is free.
50.
When Martha comes home, her parents tell her, they will move very soon. She is worried about Scott and Mary and the boy.
51.
Martha locks herself in her room. She thinks about the possibilities of giveing Scott information about her move.
52.
When Scott comes to school friday he hears about Martha leaving the school. He is shocked and wants to know, where Martha moves. But he doesn`t get any information.
53.
Martha has to care about Abomination and packs her cloaths. She helps her mother and trys to find a possibility to go out, to leave a message for Scott.
54.
Scott wants to go to Martha but at first he checks the internet and finds a message from Mary. He wants to tell it to Martha, but he doesn´t know how, so he answerd.
55.
Scott wants to tell Martha his fellings. He finds her note in a fence. He thinks about a possible communication.
56.
Martha waits for Scott. The phone is ringing. Father talks and a person speaks unclear things, but its a secret message.
57.
Scott thinks about the outcome of his plan. He imagines he rescues the boy and Martha, from Mary.
58.
Martha has a bad night. She prays for Mary to come. When Martha thinks about Abomination, somebody comes at the door. The father is really aggressive and Martha knows its Mary. She screams to the child`s place. She takes the child and runs to Mary. Mary takes the boy and takes Martha too.
59.
Scott sees the car with Martha and Mary. He is happy, but sad at the same time, he knows they will never meet again.He knows they are young, but he is in love. Scott asks himself if Martha thinks of him, too.
60.
Martha speaks about her new life with Mary and Jim, Jim is the new name for Abomination, Annette is in a new school with normal cloaths she gets to meet new friends. Annette shows her how to work with the internet and Martha wants to write an email to Scott.

Marther=Martha? oder?
48 ist schwer zu verstehen:| aber ich hab etwas gemacht
viel Spass:))

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