Essay Advertising (200 Words)

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My thoughts about advertising
Anytime at one day we become confronted with commercials. While we eat, drive or relax - advertising is our follower where ever we go. Many of us didn’t realize the huge amount of advertisements which is used nowadays. And so there is also a huge amount of different opinions about it. But it is important to form your own opinion about the effect and use of advertising.
But let’s begin with the ones which can’t tell apart the pros and cons of advertisements – children – again and again there are arguments about the questions if companies should be allowed to advertise to children. Of course there are many commercials especially for kids anyway but the fact that our children are helplessly delivered to this manipulation is really scarifying. The advertising forms our children and their view on the world. It is a part of our life and the most companies aren’t able to stay without advertising. Basically it’s the task of commercials or brochures to make the product famous so people recognize it and buy it. But the most people dislike advertising especially commercials on the TV meanwhile they are watching a movie or a TV show because it is annoying that advertising interrupt it. Anyway the most advertisements aren’t really recognized, people just walk off some posters in the cities or advertisements while they are surfing on the internet but they didn’t look at them very accurate.
So advertising is our „ little friend” who is always by our side without our knowing. And everybody has to decide for themselves how much they fall under influence of the advertising.