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 Hallo, ich bin ganz schlecht im Englisch und muss bis Morgen 2 Aufsätze schreiben.Schon mal vielen dank an die,die mir helfen. Könntet Ihr das bitte auf Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehler überprüfen?nochmal danke im vorraus:)


[i]Dear XXXXXX, [/i]
 [i]Thanks for your last letter and the nice photos. I am glad that you written me. Recently you ask me, what young people in Germany think about friendship. In my opinion, friendship is for most people a combination of loyalty, love, respect and trust. There are many ways to show friendship.  [/i]  
 [i]I believe that a best friend is somebody you can trust and is always with you in bad time. A good friend cares about you and your problems, helps you when you are in need. If you ask me what a friendshould not do, my answer is that a good friend doesn’t talk behind your back and doesn’t tell your secrets to other people. [/i]
 [i]I´ve got a girlfriend called XXXXXX. I think girls are betterfriends, because the girls aren’t so violent and light-minded. XXXXX is nice,funny and attentive, so I can talk with her about everything.   [/i]
 [i]In my free time I also meet my other friends often and I spend a lot of time together to talk and relax. Usually I meet them in the afternoon, or at the weekend. I like to do a lot of thinks with them, for example: skating, free running and paintball. Often we meet in Harder Park, or in a shop centre. [/i]
 [i]A very special day for me and my friends is Oktoberfest. In this time we use to visit old friends and have a lot of fun. I hope once you come to Germany and we’re going to celebrate it together.[/i]
  [i]I´m sorry I should stop my letter now. I have a lot of homework for tomorrow. I hope to hear from you soon. [/i]
 [i]Your pen friend, XXXXXX. [/i]
Frage von amygrey | am 06.05.2015 - 14:58


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 06.05.2015 - 16:52
[i]Dear XXXXXX, [/i]
[i]Thanks for your last letter and the nice photos. I am glad that you wrote to me. Recently you asked me,
what young people in Germany think about friendship. In my opinion, friendship is for most people a combination of loyalty, love, respect and trust. There are many ways to show friendship. 
 [/i] 
 [i]I believe that a best friend is somebody you can trust and who is always with you in bad times. A good friend cares about you and your problems, helps you when you are in need. If you ask me what a friend should not do, my answer is that a good friend shouldn’t talk behind your back and let out your secrets to other people. [/i]
 [i]I´ve got a girlfriend called XXXXXX. I think girls are better friends, because they aren’t so violent and light-minded. XXXXX is nice,funny and attentive, so I can talk with her about everything.  [/i]
 [i]In my free time I also [/i][i]often [/i][i]meet my other friends and we spend a lot of time together by talking and relaxing. Usually I meet them in the afternoon, or at the weekend. I like to do a lot of things with them, for example: skating, free running and paintball. Often we meet in Harder Park, or in a shop centre.[/i]
 [i]A very special day for me and my friends is Oktoberfest. In this time we use to visit old friends and have a lot of fun. I hope once you come to Germany and we’re going to celebrate it together.[/i]
  [i]I´m sorry I have to close my letter now because I have a lot of homework for tomorrow. I hope to hear from you soon. [/i]
 [i]Your pen friend, XXXXXX. [/i] 


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Antwort von amygrey | 06.05.2015 - 20:04
vielen vielen dank

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