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Hello my Name is ***** ***** and i want to talk about the school system in Canada.

The school system in Canada is the responsibility so here is given under the circumstances a large difference.

The school time in Canada takes 12 years and begins with the age of 5. 
From the age 5-7 you must visit the elementary school.
Then you go to the high school for the next 10 years.
When you have made all Exams, you got the High School Diplomo. Yet to become admitted to the University, you must vistit special courses. 
You can in addition to the normal subjects choose many different subjects in schools 
Schools with Advanced Placement Courses are most pupular schools. Advanced Placement Courses are Courses with an Niveau from Canadian Colleges.

You can visit private schools, their have an higher particularly as other schools. But private schools are expensive.
The Proficiency in Canada is particularly high. Students with an immigrant background are comparable with their class mates with the same age.
Pupils whose mother tongue is Hindi are English-speaking students to advance. The particularly from private-schools is in most times higher than public schools.

Though all schools follow the same syllabus, got other schools an better reputation as other schools.

My name is **** ***** and This was my lecture about the School Systems in Canada, i hope you liked it and rated it good.


Ich hoffe das jmd. sich die Mühe für mich macht, er bekommt natürlich dann auch eine "Beste Antwort" als "Belohnung"!

Liebe Grüße, MWP