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Hallo Zusammen :)

ich werde eine Präsentation auf englisch halten und benötige jemand der nochmal Korrektur liest.
Ich habe den Namen des Produktes unkenntlich gemacht, damit niemand denkt, ich möchte hier Werbung machen. Es ist der erste Teil des Textes und ich würde mich sehr freuen, wenn mir jemand hilft den Text etwas schöner zu machen.

1000 Dank im voraus :)

Es ist übrigens eine hausaufgabe, ich bin keine Verkäuferin!

Hi Ladies, and welcome to XYZ, fresh handmade cosmetics.

If you come in one of our stores and you see all this pretty colorfull things, you don’t think about a typical cosmetic store which is clean and full of plastic.
When you come into a XYZ store from everywhere will come fragrances and impressions that you believe you are at a fruit market or in a garden full of flowers.

You will think: Oh my god, where do I begin?

Well, that’s the reason why I am here today.
My name is Elena and I’m the Sales manager from XYZ Germany.
I would like to give you a small overview of the secrets of XYZ fresh handmade cosmetics.
And I will tell you the reasons why you should smell like roses and mushrooms.

First I would like to tell you something about the story of XYZ, the philosophy and our beliefs.
Later I will show you some of my favourite products and of course you have the chance to test it.

So, what is XYZ, fresh handmade cosmetics and what is the story about?
Does everybody know XYZ?
Marc and Mo Constantine live in Great Britain, one day they watched a french movie where two people took a bath together and soaped each other. From this day Marc and Mo thought, that soap IS SEXY.

In 1995 they founded their first XYZ Store with fresh, handmade soap and bath balls.
But, they were although inspired by german cheese stores and fruit and vegetable markets. So they decided to open a XYZ shop in Hamburg in 2002. Since this time XYZ is growing and growing. And now they have shops worldwide in over 50 countries.

But, what does XYZ really mean, what is the idea?
Well the founders were not clear about the translation of XYZ. The translation could be GREEN.
But it could also be a poem, a piece of music or a picture from the rain forest.

XYZ stands for something wonderful. And the heart of our philosophy is freshness and happiness.

All pieces are fresh made by hand with organic fragrances and organic products.
Here you can see a big freezer in one of our kitchen
We believe that happy people make happy products. That is the reason why we don’t have factories, we manufacture our products in big kitchens or directly of our shops.

Furthermore We want to know where our products come from and we want to be in control that we use good quality products. We like to make sure that we can actually visit where the materials has come from. What stands for another point of philosophy: Passion.

Our Products are 100% without animal testing, 100% vegetarian and 100% Palm Oil Free.